Major props on this one. I can definitely tell that you're putting your all into this. I really like the variation of the background music while the vocals are playing out. The track playing along the vocals doesn't sound super spectacular, but it's still really original, which is what I like the most about it. I'd only recommend that you try to make up your mind on which lines you want a vibrato. At certain points it sounded like you wanted to hold out a note, but almost added a legato at the last second. I feel that it'd definitely sound more professional if you fine-tune all the verses, just to make sure that you can memorize which lines will have that little flair to them. All in all, it was really great. (: